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    dots Submission Name: Jubileedots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsJubileedots
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    Every body had a soulful aura
    there was life rustling
    too much spirit for personal sufferings
    so I channeled a rich but common fullness
    like tapping into a hidden well
    and suddenly I was a part of something
    beautiful and bigger than my missing parts
    grand in that it stilled this heart
    from beating itself ragged
    the art was vibrant, mystic
    still but silent in demanding notice
    painters feeding off the raw essence
    the music loud and full of life
    urging towards kinetics
    focused
    and the dancers
    they rolled their hoops
    flung their poi in practiced patterns
    artful in manipulating
    a visual chorus of colors
    there was laughter and awe
    couples in bliss
    friendship
    and great benefit

    air above our heads
    earth beneath our feet
    water all around us
    and fire within our chest
    beneath the blessing of the stars

    It was an elemental experience
    transformative like alchemy
    and radiant in the ether
    calling all to come belong
    lets meditate on Resonance




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      Perhaps humanoid mesomerism is not but a derivative of the residual harmonic vibrations of kinetic supremacy. A refractive reflection of the energies of the cosmos. And then again perhaps we are the embodiment of the antiderivative incarnate. Of we corporeally preternatural resemble on the sentience to spiritualism.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2016-10-02 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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