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    dots Submission Name: Tug-A-Wardots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Bytes: 494



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    dotsTug-A-Wardots
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    I am grief stricken,
    Lost within the darkness that accompanies such feelings
    Tormented on a day to day basis
    Continuously playing this tug-a-war game between my mind and heart.
    Engulfed by misery
    That follows the loss of such an amazing person
    My stone heart can no longer bleed
    My eyes no longer shed tears
    For those days have came and went
    All that remains is this somber being
    Plagued with an unwanted game of tug-a-war.




    Submitted on 2016-10-04 12:04:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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