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    dots Submission Name: Winds of changedots
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    Author: Janesaddiction
    ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 8/25/19
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWinds of changedots
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    It happens to us all
    Seasons in our lives will change,
    like summer to fall

    Emulating a revolving door,
    as one makes an exit
    there's the expectation of more

    This wind, it's no friend of mine
    Once whispers of promise
    now send shivers down my spine

    Instinct tells us to fight, so plead my case I must
    One final appeal
    to bring renewal from scattered ashes and dust

    But what will be is not the same
    Reduced to my knees, I now know
    I've only myself to blame




    Submitted on 2016-10-04 16:56:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm not sure exactly where you're coming from with this, but even so, I feel I can relate to it. I'm not an expert, but I feel this is well written. Nice work.
    | Posted on 2016-11-12 00:00:00 | by TeslaKoyal | [ Reply to This ]


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