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Winds of change

Author: Janesaddiction
ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 8 /25 /20
Words: 92
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Winds of change

It happens to us all
Seasons in our lives will change,
like summer to fall

Emulating a revolving door,
as one makes an exit
there's the expectation of more

This wind, it's no friend of mine
Once whispers of promise
now send shivers down my spine

Instinct tells us to fight, so plead my case I must
One final appeal
to bring renewal from scattered ashes and dust

But what will be is not the same
Reduced to my knees, I now know
I've only myself to blame

Submitted on 2016-10-04 16:56:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I'm not sure exactly where you're coming from with this, but even so, I feel I can relate to it. I'm not an expert, but I feel this is well written. Nice work.
| Posted on 2016-11-12 00:00:00 | by TeslaKoyal | [ Reply to This ]

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