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    dots Submission Name: Routinedots
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    Author: SincerWritinAsh
    Elite Ratio:    6.26 - 297/260/144
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Terribly bad, first thing written in months. Felt nice to take ten minutes to do it though.


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    The everyday hustle wears on me –
    Early mornings, up before the birds sing…
    The same old song humming in my tired brain,
    “Routine, routine, routine…”
    It’s the only way to balance everything.

    I wish for the days when I could feel my way through life,
    Wasn’t so managed, so worried about potential strife.

    I would love to learn to whistle, care free,
    It might bring more company in the morning.




    Submitted on 2016-10-06 14:00:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nothing is more tedious than the mundane. Adulthood seems to exploit this and how easy it is to get lost in it. We all need some routines in order to achieve however, one must never forget the spontaneity that makes life exciting, worth living.

    This is interesting, particularly the last line as it allows the reader to fill in the unknown
    | Posted on 2016-10-11 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting connotation with the final verse. And wholly understandable.
    | Posted on 2016-10-06 00:00:00 | by Ontlogicalamity | [ Reply to This ]


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