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    dots Submission Name: Faith & Firesides - a joint poemdots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
    Words: 864
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFaith & Firesides - a joint poemdots
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    I watched you for a moment
    sitting stiff in staggered poise
    against an illuminated teepee
    seer peering into quiet flames
    looking for something
    scratching thoughts suppressed
    and you're lost
    in the best of worse ways.

    I have never seen you so distant
    you beautifully evidenced integrity
    by baring self and weighing burden
    as willing proof in your conviction
    you will forever own that moment
    where you shaped for me
    Three years lost and when I found you
    I tasted wasted moments searching
    for a welcome smile that wasn't there,

    Always fixing self alone
    amending needs
    and you looked right through me
    while my heart curled inward
    caught between a presence appreciated
    and that sleepy hollow gaze.

    you look tired
    of lying to yourself on the surface
    it's killing you and your purpose
    and you deserve real happiness
    mistakes meant less today
    Let's trust this world to accept
    us for our hearts apart while
    finding time together.

    We are so much better
    than this failure to start again
    when we practiced caring
    still the strongest bond i've known
    and i'm still here, that you would let me
    carry us out before
    the darkness can settle in.

    But all goes unsaid.
    Instead, we trade small talk
    (practiced empty words leading nowhere)
    so, I sought sentiment.
    Four minutes in you had to go.
    We hugged brief and broke
    into goodbyes.

    your scent lingered after, it hinted
    that love still resides within
    though you'd like to break and bury it
    some piece is hanging around your heart
    meaning you haven't kicked this habit.
    but those memories are cold
    leaving room for no presumption beyond confidence.

    I saw in your stare you were troubled
    with those green-grey orbs doubled up
    stained sage and sharkskin, abalone luster
    big windows for such reservation
    You think you've lost this love
    because you pushed with quiet and distance
    until that light in your eyes
    went out with our spark once
    severed from the source
    but I held onto our best, while
    fixing what was wearing thin
    and I'll show you

    Feel me out,
    I've some sanity, simply
    honest in loving you both grand and plainly
    poetic or just plain speak
    I found confirmation at the festival
    that sharing in elation during moments
    free and separate but bonded by consciousness
    sharing experiences and the stakes of old gods
    we'd manifest excitement spurring passion on
    maybe even finding new pride in each other

    and I promise

    If we get back to the quiet,
    or craft sanctuary on the spot,
    find some solace in my sureness
    knowing I can hold you like I used to.
    When the world's spin would slow to stop
    on an instant existing as touch,
    you clench, uncertain
    unable to melt into just existing with me
    but I'd build all warmth into connecting whole
    and win your peace with persistence
    then
    seek a rich closeness
    where emotions are corporeal, even metaphoric
    as body heat building between us
    produces hearthfire adjoining two wicker rocking chairs
    symbolize souls swaying infinite in subsistence
    confiding spirit in each other's character
    and aging graceful with brandished youth
    together cross destinies and though
    nothing is promised,
    I know
    we can count on each other

    If we were to be again
    (or newly for the first time
    as we are not as we once were)
    could with one accord slip between sheets
    or press hard against strong walls
    and,
    I'd be earnest in pleasing,
    even yearning,
    edacious in meeting your impulses
    or fulfilling fantasy
    and learning from every utterance
    that escapes as pleasure
    put time and pressure on the slit
    both seduced and eager to gratify
    split tongue to tongue then lip to lips
    until a smile swells with wanton nerves
    eased with tender tease into sexual suspense
    still spirited in appreciation of this bashful charm
    would quiver at me natural with honest want
    and I would play primal and roughen at your whim
    or when aspired to for sake of conciliating your desire
    to be taken instead of coaxed, or even punished
    turning you away and pounding out to rhythm
    pull your hair behind that arching back,
    sharpness raw leaving you fevered
    moaning for the both of us and
    your round gaping mouth begging more
    wanting to exist as one until
    the lust subsides and breathing slows
    further,
    I'd lean in until my chest grazes bare back
    reach around and clench firm each breast
    bury my head in your shoulder until we are
    neck and neck spilling steam like fire breathers
    nipping at star maps of sensory sweet spots
    tracing out the constellations
    where your nape approaches earlobes and
    trailing tongued kisses down your neckline
    before embracing you again accomplished
    boldly naked and unaffected
    cast covers aside for better promise of your body
    all flushed beauty, glowing, and I'd hold you close
    lay sprawled first, entangled in euphoria
    grow tender when all echos of our frenzied actions
    spent are rendered speechless
    My sternum serves a cradle for you to rest your crown
    heavy from being balanced on the edge of eternity
    and falling in




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