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    dots Submission Name: Don't Really Knowdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.41 - 5/110/127
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsDon't Really Knowdots
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    I don't understand myself.
    One day I can take on the world,
    And the next i can't get out of bed.
    It just doesn't make sense.

    I try to be THE GUY,
    But that guy isn't me anymore.
    He disappeared,
    And i can't find him.

    I know I'm not alone,
    But i'm terrified to ask for help.
    I don't want to be a burden,
    But i'm not OK as i am now.

    I just don't understand.
    Who i am now.
    What i am now.
    Maybe i never will.




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      I'm learning that Happiness is a lot of hard work, and a conscious decision sometimes, like a "Fake it till you make it" concept. Bottom line, however, THE GUY isn't always The Guy. Sometimes it's better to be yourself, instead of forcing yourself into a role that was only supposed to be seasonal.
    | Posted on 2017-01-06 00:00:00 | by WriteSomething | [ Reply to This ]
      Have no fear, no one cares, just be yourself and find someone who does care, for someone does care.
    | Posted on 2016-10-11 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      They say that being old can be a burden, but being young is also very confusing at times. Always a new quandary to fathom, a new outlook to consider, new opinions to represent, and all these things have to be assimilated into your repertory so you can work with them, express them coherently. It can be a real struggle. Give yourself a chance you will come into yourself with a little effort and some thoughtful cogitation.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2016-10-11 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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