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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    You,

    So far away, where time can not touch.
    The telephone does not connect from
    the depths of the Ecuador; division.
    Luna, Roma, Emotions in plaid.
    Out beyond the forest lays
    A beautiful concept of a
    couple enjoying the day.
    Picnic and cloth laid upon the ground
    With flannel filled love abound.
    Sparks a flame inside
    Each other's hearts.
    The clouds,
    the entertainment
    of the hour.
    Fill all hearts
    With this
    Desire.


    Marching ants come to
    Play with doggie filled
    Smiles stomping away.


    Insects
    wind
    Chime
    away.



    The colorful
    Projections
    Begin to
    Sway


    A
    warm
    Embrace
    Entangling
    The energies
    Reverberating



    Grounding
    Together










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    ||| Comments |||
      I went on a picnic once with a girl I met on tinder. She didn't really like my fruit salad (to be fair, I've yet to meet a girl on tinder who does like fruit). There were people nearby playing baseball, and the ever crisp sound of the bat hitting the ball kept us too weary to carelessly lay and watch the sky. We broke things off a day or two after Trump was elected; we had a disagreement.

    I much prefer visiting small islands on rainy days. The serene discomfort of being cold and wet, the unwillingness to explore with pruney digits, the wisp of warmth in each kiss, and the eerie visibility of the other's breath.
    | Posted on 2017-01-29 00:00:00 | by Outlaw | [ Reply to This ]
      You are searching for something that is hard to find in this day and age, simple things seem to get more complicated and complicated things more simple. :D I enjoyed the poem, I'm surprised to see people are still posting here. I also posted a poem, check it out maybe you'll like it...
    | Posted on 2016-10-20 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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