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    dots Submission Name: Hyperrealism Personasdots
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    Author: ShadowParadox
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 23/66/34
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 810
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1078



    Description:
       Inspired from random alien art on pinterest . . .


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    dotsHyperrealism Personasdots
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    Sketch us a world
    In between your fingers
    Magical and alien
    While the forest lingers
    In your eyes

    Humanity is hidden beneath our scales
    Vicious and scathing
    Like those blue orbits
    Beaded on your wings

    Darling

    We are made of nightmares
    Ink stained on our bended spines
    We carry the pains of everyday
    Lodged in a golden pocket in our cranium

    We are fused in a tunnel of unknowing
    Spiraling into a forbidden future
    Our tongues the stems of black roses
    We speak the language of revelations

    Our speech is hypersonic
    Vaporizing the surfaces of minds

    We’ve come to conquer and rule
    As we swallow the diamonds
    That blooms from your knowledge

    Wisdom is depicted on our bones
    Layered on the mural of your heart

    Watch us twist our alabaster bodies
    While we dance to your art

    Inside this world you’ve sketched for us




    Submitted on 2016-10-21 00:05:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Now, this is a painting I like. I love the dark shades of blue and gold contours emanating throughout. And the language used is magnificent. I really enjoy reading your work a lot. It's exactly like something I would write.
    | Posted on 2016-10-21 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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