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    dots Submission Name: Humans Are Dumbdots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 649
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    dotsHumans Are Dumbdots
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    I lost my faith, if you find it it's all yours
    I'll leave the theists to their goddamn unicorns
    You'll find that a free mind is its own reward
    Even Jesus was atheist when he was born

    I'm King of Limbo
    Blowin' Indo out my window 'cuz humans are dumb
    A myopic conscience got this ape spewing God's nonsense
    'cuz humans are dumb
    I cut my self on Occam's Razor; died; now I don't exist
    I could breathe the spirals in your eye
    God's a solipsist, blaming all of this on your eyes

    Noodley Appendages and Teapots 'round the sun
    Superstitious adages for epochs bound reason
    Sunday service sermon served by Neil Degrasse Tyson, with
    Sacramental Zombie Flesh; Spiritual Cannibalism

    I'm King of Limbo
    Blowin' Indo out my window 'cuz humans are dumb
    A myopic conscious(ness) got this God spewing ape nonsense
    'cuz humans are dumb
    I cut my self on Occam's Razor; died; now I don't exist
    I could breathe the spirals in your eye
    Lest God is a solipsist, blaming all of this on your eyes

    He's the one and only
    The Pygmalion's Son
    He's the one and only
    We proved it to Sigma 5




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