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    dots Submission Name: Nothingblissdots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 227
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsNothingblissdots
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    Heaven must be right for somebody
    but I'll take all my time to the grave with me
    A sandbox I can play for eternity
    Where I'll sing and decay songs to entropy

    No sum of me in closed-eye vigils
    No hell to fly on wings of angels
    Drift away and feel no
    Pain will fade and so will all this
    This is the bliss of nothingness
    To drift away and feel nothing at all

    Nothing here can stay
    Not even pain

    If death is just rebirth, life is a prison cell
    A mobius strip of hurt, I'd just kill myself
    But I will take my time for what it's worth
    And I wont look behind as I leave the earth

    No sum of me in closed-eye vigils
    No hell to fly on wings of angels
    Drift away and feel no
    Pain will fade and so will all this
    This is the bliss of nothingness
    To drift away and feel nothing at all

    But the random keeps flowing, no heartbeat to move it on

    Nothing here can stay
    Not even pain

    At least I got a head start
    Feel so cold and hollow above ground
    Feel so cold and hollow, so below
    Feel so cold and hollow above ground
    At least I got a head start

    Nothing here can stay




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