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Nothingbliss


Author: NoMartyr
ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33 /97 /91
Words: 227
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Nothingbliss



Heaven must be right for somebody
but I'll take all my time to the grave with me
A sandbox I can play for eternity
Where I'll sing and decay songs to entropy

No sum of me in closed-eye vigils
No hell to fly on wings of angels
Drift away and feel no
Pain will fade and so will all this
This is the bliss of nothingness
To drift away and feel nothing at all

Nothing here can stay
Not even pain

If death is just rebirth, life is a prison cell
A mobius strip of hurt, I'd just kill myself
But I will take my time for what it's worth
And I wont look behind as I leave the earth

No sum of me in closed-eye vigils
No hell to fly on wings of angels
Drift away and feel no
Pain will fade and so will all this
This is the bliss of nothingness
To drift away and feel nothing at all

But the random keeps flowing, no heartbeat to move it on

Nothing here can stay
Not even pain

At least I got a head start
Feel so cold and hollow above ground
Feel so cold and hollow, so below
Feel so cold and hollow above ground
At least I got a head start

Nothing here can stay




Submitted on 2016-10-24 02:07:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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