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Sum of Human


Author: NoMartyr
ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33 /97 /91
Words: 165
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Sum of Human



We don't know where we are
We are lost and so are the stars
We don't know who we are
One rung up on the monkey bars

Up and down quarks
We know their quirks and still don't understand
Intrinsically we can know anything
But we just see patterns in the sand
What's forged in the stars forges what we are
but the whole outweighs its parts
The How is debatable, but there's still five variables
in the sum of human

We don't even have the time
We don't understand our own mind
What we are we may not define
And there's no rhyme or reason why


Up and down quarks
We know their quirks and still don't understand
Intrinsically we can know anything
But we just see patterns in the sand
What's forged in the stars forges what we are
but the whole outweighs its parts
The How is debatable, but there's still five variables
in the sum of human




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