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    dots Submission Name: Sum of Humandots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSum of Humandots
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    We don't know where we are
    We are lost and so are the stars
    We don't know who we are
    One rung up on the monkey bars

    Up and down quarks
    We know their quirks and still don't understand
    Intrinsically we can know anything
    But we just see patterns in the sand
    What's forged in the stars forges what we are
    but the whole outweighs its parts
    The How is debatable, but there's still five variables
    in the sum of human

    We don't even have the time
    We don't understand our own mind
    What we are we may not define
    And there's no rhyme or reason why


    Up and down quarks
    We know their quirks and still don't understand
    Intrinsically we can know anything
    But we just see patterns in the sand
    What's forged in the stars forges what we are
    but the whole outweighs its parts
    The How is debatable, but there's still five variables
    in the sum of human




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