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    dots Submission Name: Sleeping Beautydots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 186
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSleeping Beautydots
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    Frostbit by the thermidor
    Icepick on the study floor
    It's like we're really separated now
    By a river of blood
    Where they found her fast asleep
    Red sun gleaming
    Dreaming for freedom with a bullet in her brain
    Now, what is to be done?

    Rest in power, sleeping beauty
    I know we're gonna paint the whole world red
    Surrounded by comrades and friends
    We're gonna come meet you
    At the next epoch of history

    All the walls are closing in again
    In service of antagonizing and dividing all our lives
    Into false distinctions
    Black and white, we're hitched unto the bridle
    While the idle brutalize us, Karoshi us til we die
    Now, what is to be done?

    Rest in power, sleeping beauty
    I know we're gonna paint the whole world red
    Surrounded by comrades and friends
    We're gonna come meet you
    At the next epoch of history
    Now what is to be done?
    Rest in power, sleeping beauty
    I know we're gonna paint the whole world red
    Surrounded by comrades and friends
    We're gonna come meet you
    At the next epoch of history




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