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    dots Submission Name: Red Terrordots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1356
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    dotsRed Terrordots
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    Nowhere to turn, nowhere to run to
    It's all been reduced to this
    Longer leashes from the lapdogs
    Lapping up their master's spit
    There's a piggy in the corner
    Stainin' up his nice brown shirt
    Feastin' on some unarmed corpses
    Waiting for his just desserts

    Nothing can stop us
    Hang loose, our noose will soon be ready for you
    Nothing can stop us

    You can't escape the consequences
    There is no compromise
    You will plead to these offenses
    You will answer to your crimes
    You stoked the flames of revolution
    Overworked and brutalized
    Now we'll see through retribution
    If fat cats have nine lives

    Nothing can stop us
    Hang loose, our noose will soon be ready for you
    Nothing can stop us




    Submitted on 2016-10-24 02:13:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I dunno about this man. Maybe things will change now that Donald Duck is in charge? :D
    | Posted on 2016-11-07 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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