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    dots Submission Name: Arms Racedots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsArms Racedots
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    Behind a human shield
    You've taken up your arms
    An assault without yield
    You've colonized my heart
    Bury your intentions
    And struggle to hold back
    Prep for retaliation
    My counterattack

    You have no power over me
    I've been juxtaposing
    All of your prose and your misdeeds
    You have no power over me
    It's been an arms race
    Remaining an arms length out from me

    Fortified and reinforced
    She's ramparting her heart
    And now my hands been forced
    To tear it all apart
    With a preemptive strike
    She had the upper hand
    When I unleash upon her
    She will be surrendering to me

    You have no power over me
    She's speaking with airs
    But her eyes betray her once again
    You have no power over me
    I've been juxtaposing
    All of your prose and your misdeeds

    Please don't stop fucking with my head

    You have no power over me
    I'll have you begging for mercy
    On your knees at my feet
    You have no power over me
    Prep the white flags and treaties
    Because you will be surrendering to me




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