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    dots Submission Name: Sunny Side Updots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSunny Side Updots
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    I am
    But the
    Clay
    That
    You
    Claim.




    I am
    but the
    Light of
    each day.




    Submitted on 2016-10-26 01:47:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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