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    dots Submission Name: Wide Eyed Keysdots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWide Eyed Keysdots
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    Do not hold on to love
    Like the black keys of a
    Piano, but hold onto to it
    As if it were your only keys
    To your heart and the only melody
    In your life. And when you lay your head
    Down at night, may it be all the keys of a
    piano and the pedals too. Pound and stomp
    every note, let the melody flow, may it be
    Concluded with a sweet high note of the sorts.




    Submitted on 2016-10-26 01:54:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this quite a bit. It's short but sweet. To me this says let the love be limitless. The bit about the piano is great. Glad I got to read this. Nice work. :)
    | Posted on 2016-11-13 00:00:00 | by TeslaKoyal | [ Reply to This ]


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