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    dots Submission Name: all soulsdots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 368/381/226
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsall soulsdots
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    was it grafted interference
    or was it redolent curse;
    all this time, scraping moss
    across unguerneyed pavers

    each exercise a shocker
    grating petitions scour the air;
    a dragging fence-gate
    badly in need of repair

    on either side, stand on a lean
    dripping candles and wilting flowers;
    suited sentinels vacuum
    a freshly emptied hearse




    Submitted on 2016-10-31 02:44:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      unguerneyed? Is this even a word? Please explain it to me as I'm not familiar with it. I understood the rest of the poem and quite liked the dark almost medieval atmosphere...
    | Posted on 2016-11-05 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      What an appropriate piece for this season, this was definitely eery. The format was simple but the word choice and subject compliment it well as always, you have provided a well written piece. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2016-11-03 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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