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    dots Submission Name: Hey Honeysuckle Babedots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.14 - 366/359/149
    Words: 293
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 517
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1743



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    dotsHey Honeysuckle Babedots
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    Hey Honeysuckle babe, look over here and hush
    I’m a slappin’ my knee and a stompin’ my feet
    And playing my harmonica just for you
    I may be wrong- but I think I may even be in tune

    Hey little mama, look at the pastel moon
    Crawling through our window and
    stretching across our sheets
    Now lay, darlin’, nude upon our bed
    Unfurl your body into mine
    And lets make love fiercely and tenderly and as we should

    Until our DNA is forged as one
    Until our words are nothing but syllabic sighs
    And we are raconteurial in our kisses
    Until your tongue speaks in my mouth
    And my scepter resonates within your womb

    Hey little darlin’, I like the way you play my slide trombone
    I know it’s real big to handle, but sugar you take it So well
    Now blow baby blow a melody so Fine and sweet
    That the angels that lost their place will bow and weep and sigh

    Hey sugarplum, I love when you rise to bite my chin
    There is an ecstasy that lies in the cleft, a mystery unknown
    Dig your teeth deep within and unearth it in diamonds
    It's here that our lives will unfold like an ancient map in guidance & solace

    Bite me in your vengeance- indelible and bloody
    Bite me at midnight when the moon
    howls and cloaks the creamy stars
    Bite me until I take root in orchards
    and forever linger in taste and spades
    Even long after the reaper has come to claim me

    So Bite me hard, baby- and
    swallow me whole or none at all

    DiCicco Cosentino




    Submitted on 2016-11-06 01:50:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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