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    dots Submission Name: harvest mooningdots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 368/381/226
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Dark
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    dotsharvest mooningdots
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    shadowy sheets cover,
    dark shining lips purse;
    pointy ears prick skyward
    as corn stalks pondered
    chanting scarecrows curse
    in a sea of dreams left over





    Submitted on 2016-11-06 18:34:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the images here, dark nature and witchcraft. I used to write similar to this, check out my older poems posted here if you like, I think you will enjoy some of them. Good write!
    | Posted on 2016-11-07 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      The vast array of possibility is truly endless. The impending preponderances of sentience are a multifaceted and ominous affair even if perhaps much of it may be purely noumenal, as opposed to empirically epistemological phenomenon.

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    | Posted on 2016-11-07 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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