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    dots Submission Name: The Great Gulag in the Skydots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1141
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    dotsThe Great Gulag in the Skydots
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    people come people go
    it's not if i don't know
    just wish i'd known some other time

    fretting from to and fro
    there's always some place to go
    if time could slow down for a while

    if i could be so bold
    i would escape myself
    and if i could start it over
    i would erase myself
    and if i just let you go
    i couldn't face myself
    and if i could live forever
    i would just waste myself

    i gave my heart to a reactionary girl and it's broken
    afraid she'll rot in the great gulag in the sky

    you crossed my heart
    now hope to die
    i play this one all the time
    and it was worth it all the while

    though we part
    i hope to find
    one day when the time is right
    you and i in the great gulag in the sky

    if i could be so bold
    i would escape myself
    and if i could start it over
    i would erase myself
    and if i just let you go
    i couldn't face myself
    and if i could live forever
    i would just waste myself

    i gave my heart to a reactionary girl and it's broken
    afraid she'll rot in the great gulag in the sky




    Submitted on 2016-11-07 15:21:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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