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    dots Submission Name: Ancientdots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 52/166/172
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsAncientdots
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    Shy
    By
    Lightning
    Sky.


    Bliss
    Is
    All
    Of
    This.


    Methuzeula's
    Roots




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