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    dots Submission Name: Circulardots
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    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/257/152
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsCirculardots
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    Being the sky
    watching the moon
    No friends or liars

    Nothing ever built up higher

    To get unwound

    Fear burned away
    Hoping it could live upon a shelf

    Where it could speak as freely
    As any religion

    Touch


    Yourself (as you so often do)
    Questioning moments that break the ice

    Still...the wolf that aids the weak

    Your running has only gotten you to the point
    Of wondering what you left behind.

    Who is your enemy?

    Being the moon
    Inhabiting the sky
    Watching trends transpire




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