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    dots Submission Name: She's Not my Lady, But I Love Herdots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.14 - 366/359/149
    Words: 276
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsShe's Not my Lady, But I Love Herdots
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    She’s not my lady, but I love her
    And I will meet her at the fjords when the neon sea sings
    There she’ll lie under me as a suckling cub
    And find shelter from the storm beneath my heavy body
    And I will hold the iridescent algae like the stars and lay them at her feet
    Together we’ll whisper poetry in their ears
    And scatter them like dandelion spears among the sky
    Like children whooshing wishes in the summer night

    She’s not my lady, but I love her
    And I will hold her tiny breasts in my hands
    Like clusters of mamones
    I will slowly peel back the green skin and savor
    The fruit between my teeth until they’re ripe as dawn
    I’ll hold them with my lips as the husbandman and
    Roll them around my mouth like bald suns
    And they shall rise up to meet my loves
    Like the nightingale’s belly rises to sing psalms in the night

    She’s not my lady, but I love her
    And I will pull her close and read her eyes like scrolls
    The words will tangle in my beard like feathers
    And guide me to my spice-box of rhymes
    Here I will unravel my bones and discover myself in time and meter
    My ode shall fall softly into the lines of her lips
    Like lush purple seeps into the terroir of the vintner’s hands
    It’s in the vast Venezuelan nights that I yearn to taste her most
    BUT NO---

    She’s not my lady, and I love her…

    DiCicco Cosentino




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