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    dots Submission Name: Closuredots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/65/84
    Words: 382
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    May I have your attention please
    Must I get down on my knees
    While begging you to stay
    To not ever go away
    Should I apologize
    Because I need you in my life
    Because without you I'm not okay
    So will you please just stay
    Tell me what to do
    How do I keep you
    How do I make sure you don't leave
    That you won't abandon me
    Because I feel worthless
    And what I would do is endless
    To keep you from leaving
    And now I'm grieving
    Because I lost myself again
    Inside this isolated pen
    Of self destruction
    Among the rest of my corruptions
    You kicked me when I was down
    Though I thought you knew the sound
    Of my cries
    The flat out obvious lies
    That I was okay with what went on
    But you couldn't have been more wrong
    To giving in to whatever urge
    And putting me on that verge
    Of suicide
    Where I wished that I had died
    And whether or not you meant to hurt
    I still feel lower than fucking dirt
    The traumatic history I've had
    Was so fucking bad
    That it stuck with me this far
    And to raise that shitty bar
    Something happened with us
    Though I gave you all my trust
    You knew it all
    But you still called
    And now I live with what you did
    No, I'm not a kid
    But it was still wrong
    And you knew that all along
    That being said, I forgive you
    Even though you left me with this issue
    I'm gonna be okay
    Even if I break down every day
    I just hope you know what you caused
    The damage you inflicted because
    I still blame myself
    Though all I wanted was your help
    I refuse to believe that you meant harm
    But those who know are quite alarmed
    And they blame you
    Everyone blames you
    The only one who doesn't
    Is the only one who wasn't
    Okay with the situation
    No boundaries, few limitations
    I was doing what I always did
    Since I was just a little kid
    To keep you from going away
    But now you're gone anyway
    So what do I do
    Apologize to you
    Do what I've done for so fucking long
    Or break this cycle and move on




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