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    dots Submission Name: It's not in the Way...dots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.08 - 366/364/154
    Words: 255
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 776
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       Another quick-isa write before bed.

    PS Francis is a girl's name in Venezuela. In particular, my girl's name.


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    dotsIt's not in the Way...dots
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    It’s not in the way I spin my speech
    Nor in the way my tongue twizzles behind my teeth
    But in the way your flecked eyes move me to sing your praise
    Among the stars and bow to kiss the mound of dirt beneath your feet

    It’s not in the way I rise to protect you
    Nor in the way my blood thrashes through my veins
    But in the way your olive body calls unto mine to cover you
    Among the arrows and rise up to meet your lips beyond the moon

    It’s not in the way I hold your hips
    Nor in the way my fingers discover your cadence
    But in the way your lithe legs unfold in my palms as pearls
    Among the shore and leads me to the oyster amidst your thighs

    It’s not in the way I bite your saltiness
    Nor in the way my mouth expands to savor you
    But in the way your moist poppy-lips unfurl with vengeance
    Among the wilderness of my face and scorches the back of my throat

    It’s not in the way I whisper Francis
    Nor in the way my jaw opens to spit K- I -T –A to the tangled wind
    But in the way your touch scribbles epiphanies
    Among the curves in my chest and dissolves in me like autumn

    It’s not in all ways I thought to love you
    But in all the ways I hadn’t-

    DiCicco Cosentino




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