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    dots Submission Name: Nature dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsNature dots
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    Hold onto it
    like a rose
    with thorns.


    Something to
    be careful with.
    Cautious and yet,
    struck, by innocent
    beauty in its natural
    environment.


    Provide
    and nurture
    notice a blossom
    beyond imagination.

    Beauty,
    naturally existing
    within our days.

    Behold this
    Environment. It
    Should be embraced
    With dignity and grace.








    Submitted on 2016-11-16 03:41:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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