Evening settles- a
Kimono of magenta Skies
Slipping (past) the turquoise stars
(The) lullaby of (a) thousand cherubim
Each nuance rising like the dandelion
All for you, my love
Just a few little things that I noticed in the text. This feels as if it was hurriedly written, like a sketch. I prefer the first part to the second probably because I can't quite make the connection between a cherub and a dandelion.