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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Looking
    around
    taking
    in the
    surroundings.



    chitter
    chatter
    chatter chitter
    chatter.



    Words
    words
    words
    stories
    emotions
    share
    sharing
    more sharing
    TMI laugh
    laughing
    chatter



    chitter






    Chatter








    Chitter








    Cricket cherp








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    Silence








    Submitted on 2016-11-18 23:52:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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