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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 52/166/172
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Looking
    around
    taking
    in the
    surroundings.



    chitter
    chatter
    chatter chitter
    chatter.



    Words
    words
    words
    stories
    emotions
    share
    sharing
    more sharing
    TMI laugh
    laughing
    chatter



    chitter






    Chatter








    Chitter








    Cricket cherp








    cherp








    Silence








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