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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/175
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Looking
    around
    taking
    in the
    surroundings.



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    chatter.



    Words
    words
    words
    stories
    emotions
    share
    sharing
    more sharing
    TMI laugh
    laughing
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    Chatter








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    Silence








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