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    dots Submission Name: Infinit Eyes dots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.19 - 366/354/146
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 366
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    dotsInfinit Eyes dots
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    I’ve been thinking about your eyes tonight-

    Not in how perfectly brown and perfectly shaped they are
    Like two supple cocoa beans to be savored

    But in a more transient and transcendent way- I guess

    I see a sort of infinitude in your eyes- a field of wildflowers
    Enchanting me as spring enchants the sleeping seeds to life-

    They are two agrologist that have unearthed me and have struck iridescence
    The sweet secret beneath the heaving soil and heavy stones is set free

    Like a bird enabled to take his place among the stars-
    And all this,

    I
         owe
                   to those Infinite
                                                 eyes.

    DiCicco Cosentino




    Submitted on 2016-11-20 00:30:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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