Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Infinit Eyes dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.23 - 366/349/146
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 264
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1221



    Description:
       Quick ditty b4 bed


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsInfinit Eyes dots
    -------------------------------------------



    I’ve been thinking about your eyes tonight-

    Not in how perfectly brown and perfectly shaped they are
    Like two supple cocoa beans to be savored

    But in a more transient and transcendent way- I guess

    I see a sort of infinitude in your eyes- a field of wildflowers
    Enchanting me as spring enchants the sleeping seeds to life-

    They are two agrologist that have unearthed me and have struck iridescence
    The sweet secret beneath the heaving soil and heavy stones is set free

    Like a bird enabled to take his place among the stars-
    And all this,

    I
         owe
                   to those Infinite
                                                 eyes.

    DiCicco Cosentino




    Submitted on 2016-11-20 00:30:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201572

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Orphan's Lament written by annie0888
    Infinit Eyes written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Sea Dream written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Style written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Through & Through written by Chelebel
    Distant written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Maybe He’s Watching my Road written by lukewarm
    The Docile and the Damned written by Passionbyapathy
    Aspen in Winter written by annie0888
    Goodnight Prayer written by annie0888
    the daily supernatural written by annie0888
    Time written by phil askew
    My Acid Trip written by eggshells
    Waning Moon written by rev.jpfadeproof
    I didn't Fall in Love written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Labor Power written by NoMartyr
    Tender Bites written by Chelebel
    drunken state written by Daniel Barlow
    Orbit written by Chelebel
    In That Day written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Confide written by Namlooc20
    nine:twenty-one written by isabella
    The Light in this Room written by lori_tab
    7 Autumn evening Haikus written by rev.jpfadeproof
    I'm a Premadonna written by Chelebel
    Feline written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Life without fear written by Ramneet
    Midwinter Madness written by Passionbyapathy
    Love Faults All written by poetotoe
    Crescent Moon written by annie0888

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry