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    dots Submission Name: Feline dots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.08 - 366/364/154
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1129
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    Description:
       My Vikings are playing crappy defense and so I thought I write about her to keep me occupied.


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    dotsFeline dots
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    You emerge from the shower stealthily
    Like a cat coyly pressing one paw in front of the other.

    A famished feline ravished and claws out- ready to bloody my back.

    I’m not shy, are you?

    Baby: I’ve seen your nakedness like the bare stars,
    Your body calls to me at mid-night like the caterwaul of alley cats.

    I’m bestial, and hard to handle; but my girt makes it more interesting,                     don’t you think?

    Yeah: I’ll be gentle, for a while; but you excite me like the cat-eyed moon
    Excites the tides– Relax: in time your milky lips will adjust.

    Then we can be rough. A pull of hair, a slap on the ass, my hand around your throat and deep thrusting; two tramp wildcats tearing at each other’s ligaments.

    Purr, pussycat purr:

    Come

    now get some rest. I know you’re going to be sore.
    Your morning bath awaits you.

    DICICCO COSENTINO




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