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    dots Submission Name: Yasogirl712dots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.16 - 366/357/146
    Words: 690
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 466
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 4308



    Description:
       Based on my texts with my beautiful, Kita. lol


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsYasogirl712dots
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    Act 1(ONE).

    Yasogirl712:
    Why you take personal the video? Is not for you, is not personal, is just a video I like. – 6:04 am

    Stupidguy007:
    What are you talking about, stupid? AND Good morning! – 6:04 am

    Yasogirl712:
    LOOK! *[Photo of Facebook comment inserted] -6:05 am

    Stupidguy007:
    Are you frigging serious?!!! -6:07 am

    Yasogirl712:
    Are you???- 6:07 am

    Stupidguy007:
    Not in that photo, NO! It’s called a joke! Don’t be so sensitive! Lol -6:07 am

    Yasogirl712:
    I’m sensitive? Don’t tell me that! You are dramatic!
    Yesterday you write me two poems…two long and very hard poems because you were jealous? Jealous is stupid! You are stupid! You are the “PASSIONATE” one! You always get upset! Is why I think that. – 6:09 am

    Stupidguy007:
    Again with this? Yes, I have issues, but I’m working on them and you must be fair. You either forgive me for breaking your heart those times or you don’t! Period! And yes, I am passionate! Even dramatic! I’m an artist, we even breathe dramatically. Not to mention that I’m Italian, Chica. Besides, those poems are your favorite ones. lol – 6:11 am

    PART 2 (DEUX)

    Yasogirl712:
    Is serious! Why make you joke? You break me! I am really mad! I’m going to make voodoo and punch you in your bull balls! -6:14am

    Yasogirl712:
    Jajajajajajajajajajajajaj and tie you hand…and you never can make the “move” again. You always touching your chin-6:14 am

    Stupidguy007:
    How did I break you, by simply sharing my heart? I’m a poet! I believe in speaking my mind. You really need to open up more…sometimes in life we must have difficult discussions with those we love! Its called adulthood! GROW UP! -6:14 am

    Stupidguy007:
    Besides, how many times can I apologize? I don’t beg, baby. You know that. It is, what it is. -6:14 am

    Stupidguy007:
    Oh, baby! “Tie my hands”? You kinky, little thang you! *[wink emoji x3] -6:15 am

    Yasogirl712:
    OMG! So dramatic, Stupid!!! -6:15 am

    Stupidguy007:
    Well you bring the best out of me, Darling. Lol
    Hey! I really was joking, ok? I swear, my little arepa. -6:15 am

    Yasogirl712:
    Ok. *[Hearts emoji] *[kissing emoji with heart eyes] -6:16 am

    PART 3 (TRE)

    Stupidguy007:
    Kita, I can’t sleep per usual, but I just wanted to tell you that you are wrong, per our convo yesterday! There is no way I’m more amazing than you. Pretty, yes, but amazing and more talented, not a chance. You’re the most magnificent person I’ve met and you have a heart like none other. You’re kind and sweet, and hard working, and brilliant, and talented etc… -11:50 pm

    Stupidguy007:
    The moment I laid eyes on you was like seeing the moon for the first time. I was consumed by your cascading elegance and beauty. I felt as if the moon itself lied heavy on my chest. I couldn’t breathe. I couldn’t move. I could hardly muster a thought. – 11:52 pm

    Stupidguy007:
    Now, I know that I can get uppity at times, but you must never doubt in those moments my care for you. If we were stranded on a snowy mountain I would literally offer the hollow of my body as your shelter until you were found. I wouldn’t mind dying as long as you were warm inside me. Please take comfort in my love, in my adoration, in my heart. You are my fairy muse, with purple hair, and a big red nose, and arms as wings. -11:54 pm

    Stupidguy007:
    There is a way about you that just taste like honey. It’s in the way you clap your hands when you’re really excited, and in the way you sneeze 3 times each morning as powerfully as a field mouse. It’s in the way your sleeping body entwines with mine at night, in this bed, beneath this moon, before that sun kisses our brows at dawn. -11:57 pm

    Stupidguy007:
    *[purple heart emoji x3] -11:59 pm

    DICICCO COSENTINO




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    ||| Comments |||
      Ah yes...amore! Nice to see that "love" is alive and well. Thank you for sharing!

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    | Posted on 2016-11-21 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


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