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    dots Submission Name: Musings of love dots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.19 - 366/354/146
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMusings of love dots
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    I think most people misunderstand love
    Or at best, they underestimate it-

    They think it’s Hollywood, and warm-fuzzies
    And Soft puppies and wine in bed and carousels and upside down kisses

    But

    Love
    True love
    Will grind you and toss what’s left to the bared teeth of night

    It’s Van Goah putting the knife to his ear and his heart to the canvass

    Love debones you like a fish
    You live and die for the sustenance of another

    It’s the grinning sadness of the salmon that swims upstream to lay her last eggs

    Love-

    Is Christ on the cross-

    Back shredded, tongue swollen with dehydration and crowned with thorns
    -(And all for me- all because of me – all in spite of me)-
    Expecting nothing in return

    Now
    That’s
    Love
    That’s artistry
    That’s
    Style

    dicicco cosentino ©




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