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    dots Submission Name: I didn't Fall in Lovedots
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    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.08 - 366/364/154
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI didn't Fall in Lovedots
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    It’s not that I fell in love,
    But
    Rather that it fell on me- and

    Through me-
          In lines, and songs of revolution

    My hands full with particles of you-
    Ribosomes and nucleus and lysosomes
          They revolve and rêve as the cosmos in my cells

    I feel the weight of you
    In the quiver of moonlight
          That spreads across my body-

    I sought you in the fractured earth-
    In the broken buds that will never know what it’s like to blossom
          But are content to hold the secret of the flower within

    The lemon on the vine has dissolved into syrup
    It falls through the branches like your lips drip from my limbs
          Each drop moving through the

    Space

    Between
                   Me

    And
                   You

    I will arrive in the frost of spring like the crocus-
    And
    Your breast shall spike like saffron
          On my tongue

    No
    It’s not that I fell in love
    But rather

    I swelled like the ocean to conquer

    dicicco cosentino ©




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      I get a very similar impression with this as I did with the previous one I commented on. It starts out merely romantic, and as I progress it is down right intimate. It is beautiful. I so enjoy the personification and the mood of romance you set with your imagery. You take us through seasons and it is a very natural setting that is so easy to go from this beautiful experience of young love with a person to again that higher sense of a relationship with God. I'm not sure if that is intentional or if it simply is something I find in my own relationship. Either way the depth and complexity of the romance versus the simple and sweet language balance to form a really cohesive satisfying read.


    Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2016-12-14 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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