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    dots Submission Name: I'm a Premadonna dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI'm a Premadonna dots
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    Recycled fortune cookie wishes
    whose lucky numbers never
    came to fruition.


    Reminders to be superstitious
    and you "never know who's
    in the bush," perceptions.


    Cold shoulder conditions
    with silver lining predictions
    and shut the front door inclinations.


    No compromising infinity
    within the minds
    of leaving a legacy.



    Pushing for decency
    refuting the intensity
    of your negativity.


    Collecting random phrasing,
    twisted minds go crazy.


    Reflecting upon the lazy
    and observing reasons
    for insecurities.

    Always struggling
    always working
    no time for being.


    Keep em' busy so
    there's no room
    for escaping.



    Filling the hours with
    stories, duties, cooking,
    cleaning and most importantly
    all your worries.



    Burden somebody with every
    egoistical emergency and see
    the light in their eyes deplete
    and watch them go crazy.






















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