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    dots Submission Name: A Known Strangerdots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 780
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 428



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       Something that I'm going through as of now! Can't quite decipher it.


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    dotsA Known Strangerdots
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    Cold nights when she
    Decided to come and visit
    It was no longer he
    Who really missed her
    It was fate itself who had its misfits
    And though something kept
    Their love lit
    They both found themselves
    Traveling a bottomless pit
    Though they cried in private
    All their buried anger
    They both knew
    They had slept together
    With a known stranger.




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