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    dots Submission Name: Love and the Heart in a Super Colliderdots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    6.01 - 2097/2030/1473
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLove and the Heart in a Super Colliderdots
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    Casting
    forward of the years
    for your
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                                  is
                                       the knowing
                                                                of journey.
                                                                     against the painful
                                                                spike of being
                                                                     fixed in
                                       place



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                                                                     i had imagined
                                                                                a light
                                                                     while all around
                                                                     was
                                                                                         black.




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      I think I've forgotten how to talk about poetry. But, your poetry always has a spirit, and that is what makes it worth reading. It seems perverse that we (I) so often most enjoy painful things worded. But maybe it's just a matter of being glad someone else could say what you could not. I'm glad to see you are still writing. Even through the quiet.
    | Posted on 2016-12-19 00:00:00 | by emwren | [ Reply to This ]


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