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    dots Submission Name: Goodnight Prayerdots
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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.79 - 327/377/120
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Written for my mom, as she lay dying.


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    dotsGoodnight Prayerdots
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    Goodnight Prayer

    Close your eyes now dream of peace.
    Sleep and from this earth release

    and rise. By angel arms be caught
    to heaven where seeking goes unsought.

    The work that's left is just to be
    in praise of Christ eternally.

    To sing and share and love and praise,
    to worship through uncounted days,

    with Jesus always in your sight,
    to walk forever in God's light!


    January 30, 2015




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      Thanks, Lloyd. I wrote it for my mom, when she was dying.
    | Posted on 2017-02-12 00:00:00 | by annie0888 | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice. I'm afraid my own bedtime prayers have slipped into a very long held repeat cycle which over time evolved from "Now I lay me down..." to the Lord's prayer. Again, yours is quite nice.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2017-01-07 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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