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    dots Submission Name: Carolina Blue dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 44/148/164
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Smiling Faces Beautiful Places


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    dotsCarolina Blue dots
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    And so
    the journey continues
    With love always abound
    Look for it not just in the clouds.






    Submitted on 2016-12-23 02:05:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hope sustains life and life never stops. Life keeps on evolving. Love is the most beautiful emotion and treasure in life.
    | Posted on 2017-02-15 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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