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    dots Submission Name: Midwinter Madnessdots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.3 - 207/276/228
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMidwinter Madnessdots
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    This time of year is so full of life,
    but this trip around the sun has me tired
    sore and i'm too stilled to bleed Saturnalia
    from self when the well is foul
    and the soul is dry
    iced over and packaged away
    like Omaha Steaks
    soul food in the metaphoric

    I swear I wear the seasons better
    now but i'm worse for it
    and worn
    near nothing,
    but have found
    much peace in the resistance

    The quiet cuts the quickest but as shallow
    builds on itself like patched scratches
    leaving every moment raw
    while the loneliness is eloquent
    Nothing given presence of expectation
    I've learned to muzzle it at least
    no more dusty warning words to wind
    of Isn't Anyones, and confident No Ones

    Now I'll answer silence with silence
    and that means withdrawing
    it means quitting in most senses
    so take your "stand for something" shit
    and shove it
    because I tried that,
    and it turns out the world is like a Library
    all guilty whispers and arrogant shushes
    scarce space where standing up and speaking is allowed

    Meanwhile I'm weary carrying on one-sided conversations
    with their shut-the-fuck-up sideways stares
    or evidently practiced verbal snares
    they've been studying, but I'm fluid
    my form is irrelevant and their entitled efforts wasted
    and somehow I'm the back-alley vagrant

    Any happiness is brittle and soiled by the stage




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      Atrociously impetuous impudence is not always pugnacious audacity greeted with benevolence. Sheer conception makes me happy. Of it's just about the only thing I have an unadulterated right to. Still I'm angry like you but I don't feel brittle.

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