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    dots Submission Name: Through & Throughdots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 44/148/164
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThrough & Throughdots
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    Through
    Light I survive
    Through
    Thought I
    Can
    Thrive




    Submitted on 2017-01-06 17:11:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short and simple. And yet, it gets the wheels turning. For me, the thoughts get in the way of me thriving sometimes. They keep me preoccupied in the past or hoping for the future and not feeling the light (or dark) of the present. The struggle to just "be in the moment" is a difficult one. Still, we all must think to be. Right???

    Thanks for making me ponder.

    | Posted on 2017-02-20 00:00:00 | by JanePlane | [ Reply to This ]


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