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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    1.88 - 44/140/159
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Journal: Tender Bites
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    I wish that you could see
    your whispers in my ear.
    Telling me the sweetest things,
    those things I never hear.

    And when the wind it blows,
    it follows all so near.
    It pushes against
    My back
    and whispers to
    "Come here."



    Pulls up along
    the clouds
    and spills out
    into the air.


    Believe me when I tell you,
    you're always welcome here.
    My heart it has a language
    that yours can only hear.


    There is a softness wrapped
    in tender bits
    that fills the silent air.

    And when you think
    there's nothing left just
    always know I'm here.




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      Good one. You are in love and speaking the language of love. You are in the state of euphoria which is making you feel different and away from the realities of this world.
    | Posted on 2017-01-17 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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