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    dots Submission Name: Taking Over Medots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.45 - 5/115/130
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsTaking Over Medots
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    I know it's wrong,
    But it makes me feel alright.
    All the pain fades for awhile,
    And I can be the me you remember.
    The me that you fell in love with.
    The me that you destroyed.

    So I'll take another pill.
    I'll get another high.
    Not to forget you.
    Not because I miss you.
    Because I don't want to forget myself.
    Or at least...

    Who I was.




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    ||| Comments |||
      change is essential for survival. I destroy anything that tries to keep me in the same form day-to-day.
    | Posted on 2017-03-25 00:00:00 | by WriteSomething | [ Reply to This ]
      Not at all bad.

    We both know it's wrong,
    But it makes me feel alright.
    All your pain fades for awhile,
    I can be the me to remembers.
    The me that you fell in love with.
    The me you triad too destroyed.

    So, I shell take one more pill.
    And I well get another high.
    Not only I well forget you.
    Not because we miss you.
    For we do not want you
    Forget myself at least.

    For who I was before...
    | Posted on 2017-01-16 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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