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    dots Submission Name: The Night Skydots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Night Skydots
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    For a long time I looked to you for guidance,
    To feel connected to those I cared for.
    After all we all share the same moon,
    We all see the same stars.

    Unfortunately now though..
    I can't look at you.
    I have to sever those ties.
    You are now a symbol of hate.

    Oh beautiful moon...
    How I miss being able to look up and howl.
    Oh how you made me smile.
    Now the only noise heard is sobbing.

    Sobbing from unfinished business.
    Business that will forever stay that way.
    So please stay cloudy.
    Please don't let me see the night sky.




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    | Posted on 2017-07-11 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      The Host of Hosts is in the naked eye, and is redemption, for all sins can be forgiven!

    Though not the sin of those who blaspheme, as in denying the Word of God, his begotten Son Jesus Christ.

    Hell has many catacombs waiting, for someone to occupy.
    | Posted on 2017-03-08 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      This was wonderful.
    Pika
    | Posted on 2017-01-29 00:00:00 | by Pikachuchu | [ Reply to This ]


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