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Author:	Soulraven
ASL Info:	31/Male/Illinois
Elite Ratio:	4.05 - 510/481/142
Words:	74

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Hahaha

Hillary

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We're all getting better
In a world that won't let us.
Crying to the skies
In the voice of the silent.
Voting alone
As the old grow stronger.
Women fought the right to vote,
But didn't vote for her.
They shouted,
“To prison with Hillary”
In the abyss we see,
The difference between us.
In the land of the free
we voted for slavery.

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