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    dots Submission Name: Hillarydots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHillarydots
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    We're all getting better
    In a world that won't let us.
    Crying to the skies
    In the voice of the silent.
    Voting alone
    As the old grow stronger.
    Women fought the right to vote,
    But didn't vote for her.
    They shouted,
    “To prison with Hillary”
    In the abyss we see,
    The difference between us.
    In the land of the free
    we voted for slavery.




    Submitted on 2017-01-16 23:48:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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