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    dots Submission Name: Coexistsdots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsCoexistsdots
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    I can’t stop writing
    Been up for three days,
    Still can’t find
    What i want to say.
    I write because
    My voice trembles
    When i speak,
    I often lose sight
    Of the meanings i seek.
    White sheets of paper
    My empty plains,
    Ink from my pen rains.
    Now, my eyes tired,
    Sleep I fight,
    Scribing steadily
    Into the fourth night.
    I can’t stop the flow
    Of thinking,
    Into my thoughts
    I won’t stop sinking.
    All the sentences
    Begin to twist,
    Ideals and paper
    Can coexists.
    Come and take a look
    At my sturdy Word Empire,
    Something keeps the corridors lit,
    You are my syntax fire.
    Together for each other we reach,
    In your arms
    I finally find sleep.




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