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    Author: Chelebel
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    dotsWhat ifdots
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    What if your one dollar per minute psychic had a studder.

    What if your therapist was also going to therapy.

    What if spandex was invented by the porn industry.

    What if tampons were really nose plugs.

    What if the candle in the wind was Elton johns only hit.

    What if Layla inspired a marathon.

    What if memory foam was in bras.

    What if extenze worked for your limbs.

    What if women marched for clean resources.






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