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    dots Submission Name: Pumpkinhead Lullabydots
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    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.49 - 145/114/65
    Words: 245
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Probably the wrong season to post this...but alas, I had some notes that needed putting together.


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    dotsPumpkinhead Lullabydots
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    In the mid-autumn days
    amid the brown and dried
    The pumpkinheads awaken
    void and Argus-eyed

    Patches of orange despair
    for the coming cold nights
    From the many that rise
    some spawn into sprites

    Hellish bound souls
    with an evil intent
    That seek out the lost
    for a Hades descent

    Made of rot and undead
    a worm-ridden feast
    With the head of a gourd
    a most terrible beast

    They’ll midnight call
    and tap at your door
    Begging to enter
    wailing evermore

    And just so you know
    don't let them come in
    For a banshee led chorus
    will surely begin

    A siren serenade
    to put you to sleep
    And steal of your spirit
    to cast to the Deep

    Their insatiable hunger
    for the vim in us all
    No measure of truth
    can cause them to fall

    Yet all you must do
    to keep them at bay
    Quite simply so
    just look away

    Their rage will desist
    to the fields they shall go
    There to be carved
    as the lanterns we know

    And some even still
    into pies we will make
    With fork to plate
    no more lives they can take

    But of the seeds cast out
    some will be sown
    To be reaped once more
    when they have grown

    So the cycle continues
    and the range fills again
    When the pumpkinheads knock
    let them pass by your den

    2017 Kelly R. Sullivan




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      "In this town, we call home. Every one hail to the pumpkin song!"

    Every season is the right season for a ghoulish Halloween poem. In my opinion, anyway.
    Theme is amazing, subtle and yet so obvious. I sang this warning song in my head three times before I'd had enough.
    It has amazing lyrical flow. Much love.

    Thanks for sharing the smile,
    H
    | Posted on 2017-07-12 00:00:00 | by endlessgame23 | [ Reply to This ]


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